Kagura's justu

Kagura M wrote:

Name: Water heavens convergence
Rank: S rank
Type: Ninjusut
Used For: Offensive and defensive
Element: water
Range: water can be controlled up to 30 meters
Duration: until cancelled
Hand Seals/Charge up:Tiger-dog-monkey-snake
Description: This technique enables the user to control water and moisture around oneself much like Gaara controls his sand. It can be used to block most incoming attacks, bind or drown opponents, and shape the water into various attacks, allowing the user in conjunction with the Summoning Technique to allow water-based summonings to fight in areas that it normally need water to move around by either trapping the target in the same water or manoeuvrings the water to allow the summon to chase the target. It is able to extract and utilize groundwater, and as is very effective most areas. Water moves at a speed equal to the taijustu rank of the user's ninjustu rank, water can be sharpened into sebon, blades etc and will have a cutting strength of A rank, defenses made from the water are can block another S rank, and 2 A ranks. all of it is fine up to the blades of water with S-RAnk defense and all that stuff. Like Gaara had specific techniques beyond basic control, the blades and defenses will have to be made separately, so you do not just have wave of a hand S-Rank defense or A-Rank attack. I would say you get a C-Rank defense and attack amount just passively controlling the water
Weakness: Is useless in rocky dry areas as there isn't enough moisture or ground water to use it.

Name: Execution By Kiss
Rank: S rank Kinjustu
Type: ninjustu
Used For: supplementary
Element:
Range: contact
Duration: explained below
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: This ability allows the user to absorb all of an opponent's chakra and techniques by kissing them, allowing the user to possess multiple elemental affinities, as well as enforcing the ones they already have and gaining access to all of their victim's techniques that they are able to learn(combat skill wise with that element they absorb). After the user is done absorbing their target's chakra, they could steal their soul. This technique could also be used to determine what elemental affinities the target has by licking or sniffing them.

Due to one body being unable to handle so much chakra, the user would have to distribute the chakra they absorb into multiple bodies, and use Colour Course Change to switch to another if needed. The bodies can be any corpses, even the ones killed with this technique. The user can only store the chakra they absorb for two topics, before needing to transfer it to a body, giving them ample time to find a corpse or body to seal it in, if they do not they will have no choice but to expel the absorbed chakra losing that element. The bodies need only to be sealed in the color course change scroll to be changed to look like the user, and able to house the chakra absorbed from this technique.

The body instilled with the absotbed chakra can then use all jutsu of the person whom the chakra was taken from for that element taken. While having your chakra stolen by this jutsu, you are paralyzed, but the target can fight back if they have a higher chakra pool than the user, such as jinchuriki. Due to being able to only copy elemental jutsu, not neutral jutsu such as rasengan, jutsu that are dependent on neutral jutsu, such as rasenshuriken, cannot be learned either. The bodies if given a raw advanced element can only hold one advanced element(ex explosion, magnet)

In order to learn a Normal Element such as doton, fuuton, etc, it takes three post.(The targets post included) For an advanced element, 1,500 words must be done within the post period of elemental absorbing, if the user wants to steal the target's soul it will take an addition post. Each body has its own jutsu letting the user have access to different techniques, the user can switch to any bodies in the scroll that are stored with the color course change technique outside of battle.

In battle the user can only have two bodies with them to switch to at any given time while they can store any number in their scroll, this lets them have multiple option, but in combat they are forced to only choose 2. When the user switches bodies they will take on properties of the other body resembling if they never took damage at all from the start, except for the user's hair, which will be the only thing that is the same between all bodies, healing there injuries by switch, If a damaged body is stored it will heal after 5 posts, as long as it is not taken out of the scroll again within those 5 posts, if it is the number of posts needed to heal the body resets. Once the element of a target is drained the body will get there element and techniques that will be set in stone unless the user can kiss others with the same elements to build up that bodies techniques.

This Technique can also be used not only to steal one element but also to take one's chakra. If used for this purpose, a target's element cannot be stolen, instead the user will take 30 cp from the target per post of kissing. This makes each post the target lose a set amount of chakra which they will have to train back,the absorption goes on for a max of three post. The extra chakra is stored into the hair of the user which they can use half of to increase their personal chakra pool, The extra chakra stays with the user of this Technique unless their hair is destroyed.

Weakness: This isn't custom but you have to able to kiss a person for 3-4 without any interference, as well as losing all the chakra absorbed if your hair is destroyed. limited and a staff member has made a site version

Name: Color course change
Rank: S
Type: ninjustu
Used For: supplementary, defensive
Element:
Range: self
Duration: a post
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: This technique is used to switch her consciousness between the several bodies a user of Execution by kiss has, upon use the users chakra is projected outwards to form a scroll like form that spirals around them. The scroll fully obscures the users body making a concealed space around them, allowing the user to switch bodies. The sealed space has S rank defenses while being used. The space fades after the first post, revealing the new body of the user, created through execution by kiss.

This technique is also used to seal the corpses of people used as bodies for the technique, whenever the user wants to seal a body their chakra will project outwards to form this scroll, that will wrap around and seal the target within it, changing their body to look like the user, and allowing them to be able to house the chakra absorbed by the Execution by kiss technique.

This technique is free to anyone with the Execution by Kiss technique, as both are needed to perform the abilities of the justu.
Weakness: No weakness it is just the way that the bodies are stored and switched to.

Name: Ripple
Rank: A
Type: Genjustu
Used For: Offensive
Element:
Range: can effect anyone who looks at a max of 25 meters.
Duration: until genjustu is broken or deactivated by the user
Hand Seals/Charge up: one post charge
Description:The user infuses this genjustu into an object or themselves. The genjustu activates on a person the minute they look at whatever is infused. The justu controls the five sensesthe amount of senses one can affect it based upon someones Genjutsu prowess in teh Combat Skill area to the point where it can make the target misinterpret another person's form, shape, mass, feel, and smell to be an enemy's, or anything else. A tree could become a building, or become the user. The illusions of this technique are absolutely flawless; even if the target is aware of being under the genjustu, they cannot resist its influence. The hypnotic abilities of the justu make it a highly useful ability in combat, for the user can create simple or complex illusions to deceive their opponents. For example, by creating a decoy of themselves, or other illusions to distract their opponents, the user can hide their own movements and attack with impunity. Their opponent will remain focused on the illusion until it is too late to react. While the illusions Ripple creates are quite powerful, those with considerable power and skill themselves may be able to note slight differences in the illusions compared to the real thing, even if they are not able to determine what exactly is different. For example medical specialist could detect something amiss with a fake corpse, even if they can not realize what it is. The other weakness of the justu is that it cannot manipulate and control chakra sensory meaning the user's chakra can still be sensed if they cannot mask it some way. The only way to escape the effects of this justu is to be the user or be touching the user before it activates. When the justu deactivates any illusions made will shatter as if made of glass before fading away.

Weakness: cannot control chakra sensory

Name: Rain tiger at will
Rank: B
Type:ninjutsu, sensory
Used For: Defensive
Element: water
Range: entire village
Duration: Until cancelled
Hand Seals/Charge up: Bird-rat-ox
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the user's own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the user's senses, allow them heightened reaction while in the rain themselves. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone not of their village or a known hostile chakra signature, the existence of the intruder can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it. The rain can  be used for suiton attack, but no one besides the user can use the rain as it made from their chakra.
Weakness: canon bump to S


   Name: Hiding with the Camouflage
   Rank: A
   Type:ninjutsu, sensory
   Used For: supplementary
   Element:
   Range: self
   Duration: until deactivated
   Hand Seals/Charge up: tiger
   Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert manoeuvres but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity. The usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills, except for particularly adept users, who can completely erase even their chakra signature with it, such as the 2nd Tsuchikage, Muu, if the user of this technique is adept or higher in sensory they will be able to hide their chakra signature and make no sound as they move, effectively becoming a "non-person," having neither a physical form, nor detectable chakra, while the technique was active. Thus, they could not be detected through traditional means. This technique be will deactivated the moment they attack a person and try to wound them.
Weakness: canon
a site limitation for the cloaking techniques is that before attacking, one is rendered visible, to eliminate the bs kills and similar things
   Name: Water Release Bubbles technique
   Rank: A
   Type: ninjutsu
   Used For: Offensive
   Element: water
   Range: Bubbles can go a max range of 30 meters
   Duration: until bubbles pop
   Hand Seals/Charge up: Infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: After blowing dozens of bubbles (max 18), the user manipulates them to surround the enemy in all directions. Only the slightest amount of physical contact with an opponent is required to make these bubbles burst, resulting in a small but powerful explosion when they do. The user can then make the entirety detonate simultaneously with a snap of their fingers. describe explosive power in one bubble
   Weakness: Needs bubble pipe

   Name: Bubble Dome
   Rank: A
   Type:ninjutsu
   Used For: Defense
   Element: Water
   Range: 5 meter radius around self
   Duration: dome can last for 2 posts
   Hand Seals/Charge up: Infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: The user uses Soap Bubble Ninjutsu to create a dome around  themselves and their allies. This dome is shown to be strong enough to resist large explosions, able to take A rank damage, and 2 B ranks before popping.
   Weakness: Needs a bubble pipe

   Name: Water Release bubbles technique-Drift
   Rank: B
   Type: ninjutsu, kind of sensory
   Used For: Kinda defensive?
   Element: water
   Range: 5 meters around self
   Duration: until bubble pops
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infused chakra into bubble pipe
   Description:This technique creates a single, particularly large bubble with the bubble pipe and the user quickly jumps inside. Under their command, the bubble will take them wherever they wish. It's seemingly very capable of both traveling very long distances and floating rather high into the air with no apparent risk of popping. The user can also make the bubble camouflage to hide from anyone who's after them, and the bubble also hides their chakra signature from being sensed from the outside. The user is also able to take people with them via this technique. Upon bursting the bubble to get out of it, the user can use it do damage nearby opponents causing an small explosion. The bubble can take up to 2 B ranks before popping
   Weakness: Needs a bubble pipe.

   Name: Soap Bubble slime
   Rank: C
   Type:ninjutsu
   Used For: offensive
   Element: water
   Range: bubbles have a range of 25 meters
   Duration: until bubbles pop
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: The user blows bubbles (max 12) at an opponent, the bubbles movements can be manipulated at will by the user, and when popped, release a sticky slime, delaying or trapping an opponent. This slime is pretty strong requiring taijustu adept or higher to break out of it, or a c rank technique to destroy it.  
   Weakness: needs a bubble pipe

   Name: Ink bubble explosion
   Rank: B
   Type: ninjutsu
   Used For: Offensive
   Element: water
   Range: bubbles have a range of 30 meters
   Duration: until bubbles popped
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description:  The user sends a rush of a max of 15 bubbles toward the enemies, which they can control the movements of through thought, the bubbles grow when making contact with an enemy growing in a large bubble that surrounds them, causing them to have the risk to drown, the bubbles then appears to fill themselves up with a black liquid. This black eats away at the body of those inside over the course of 2 posts. The bubble then pops in a black inky splash, killing the enemy and leaving no sign of a corpse behind. The bubbles can take a b rank or 2 c rank attacks before popping.
   Weakness: needs a bubble pipe

   Name: Acid Permeation
   Rank: B
   Type: ninjutsu
   Used For: Offensive
   Element: water
   Range: bubbles have a range of 25 meters
   Duration: until bubbles are popped
   Hand Seals/Charge up: Infuse chakra into bubble blower
   Description: The user blows  a max of 20 small acid bubbles at their opponent, which they can manipulate the movements of. These bubbles can burn and corrode the opponent when popped causing third degree burns.
   Weakness: needs a bubble pipe

   Name: Bubble clone
   Rank: B
   Type: ninjustu
   Used For: offensive
   Element: water
   Range: typical clone range
   Duration: until clone runs out of chakra
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: The user makes a clone of themselves by using his Soap Bubble Ninjutsu with their bubble pipe. When hit, the clone pops causing a small explosion that can send people flying and damage bones. The clone has the same chakra that a shadow clone would, and doesn't need a pipe to perform soap bubble ninjustu.  
   Weakness: needs bubble pipe

   Name: Blinding Bubbles technique
   Rank: C
   Type: ninjutsu
   Used For: defensive
   Element: water
   Range: bubbles have a range of 25 meters
   Duration:  until bubbles pop
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: The user blows bubbles that they can control at the opponent. These bubbles surround the opponent. Once popped, the bubbles creates a puff of red powder that momentarily blinds the opponent. The smoke stings the eyes and throat and lasts for 2 posts.
   Weakness: needs bubble pipe

Kagura M wrote:

Name: Water heavens convergence
Rank: S rank
Type: Ninjusut
Used For: Offensive and defensive
Element: water
Range: water can be controlled up to 30 meters
Duration: until cancelled
Hand Seals/Charge up:Tiger-dog-monkey-snake
Description: This technique enables the user to control water and moisture around oneself much like Gaara controls his sand. It can be used to block most incoming attacks, bind or drown opponents, and shape the water into various attacks, allowing the user in conjunction with the Summoning Technique to allow water-based summonings to fight in areas that it normally need water to move around by either trapping the target in the same water or manoeuvrings the water to allow the summon to chase the target. It is able to extract and utilize groundwater, and as is very effective most areas. Water moves at a speed equal to the taijustu rank of the user's ninjustu rank plus1, defenses made from the water passively are B can block another B rank, and 2 c ranks, offeseve potential of passive water control is also B. B-Rank Defense, C-Rank Offense 
Weakness: Is useless in rocky dry areas as there isn't enough moisture or ground water to use it.


Name: Ripple
Rank: A
Type: Genjustu
Used For: Offensive
Element:
Range: can effect anyone who looks at a max of 25 meters.
Duration: until genjustu is broken or deactivated by the user
Hand Seals/Charge up: one post charge
Description:The user infuses this genjustu into an object or themselves. The genjustu activates on a person the minute they look at whatever is infused. The justu controls an amount of senses equal to the user's rank and can control to the point where it can make the target misinterpret another person's form, shape, mass, feel, and smell to be an enemy's, or anything else if they can control them all. A tree could become a building, or become the user. The illusions of this technique are absolutely flawless; even if the target is aware of being under the genjustu, they cannot resist its influence. The hypnotic abilities of the justu make it a highly useful ability in combat, for the user can create simple or complex illusions to deceive their opponents. For example, by creating a decoy of themselves, or other illusions to distract their opponents, the user can hide their own movements and attack with impunity. Their opponent will remain focused on the illusion until it is too late to react. While the illusions Ripple creates are quite powerful, those with considerable power and skill themselves may be able to note slight differences in the illusions compared to the real thing, even if they are not able to determine what exactly is different. For example medical specialist could detect something amiss with a fake corpse, even if they can not realize what it is. The other weakness of the justu is that it cannot manipulate and control chakra sensory meaning the user's chakra can still be sensed if they cannot mask it some way. The only way to escape the effects of this justu is to be the user or be touching the user before it activates. When the justu deactivates any illusions made will shatter as if made of glass before fading away.

Weakness: cannot control chakra sensory

Name: Rain tiger at will
Rank: B
Type:ninjutsu, sensory
Used For: Defensive
Element: water
Range: entire village
Duration: Until cancelled
Hand Seals/Charge up: Bird-rat-ox
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the user's own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the user's senses, allow them heightened reaction while in the rain themselves. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone not of their village or a known hostile chakra signature, the existence of the intruder can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it. The rain can  be used for suiton attack, but no one besides the user can use the rain as it made from their chakra. S-Rank for the range of the jutsu and the fact that you can continue to fight while it continues
Weakness: canon

   Name: Hiding with the Camouflage
   Rank: A
   Type:ninjutsu, sensory
   Used For: supplementary
   Element:
   Range: self
   Duration: until deactivated
   Hand Seals/Charge up: tiger
   Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert manoeuvres but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity. The usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills, except for particularly adept users, who can completely erase even their chakra signature with it, such as the 2nd Tsuchikage, Muu, if the user of this technique is adept or higher in sensory they will be able to hide their chakra signature and make no sound as they move, effectively becoming a "non-person," having neither a physical form, nor detectable chakra, while the technique was active. Thus, they could not be detected through traditional means. This technique be will deactivated right before the moment they attack a person and try to wound them.
Weakness: canon

   Name: Water Release Bubbles technique
   Rank: A
   Type: ninjutsu
   Used For: Offensive
   Element: water
   Range: Bubbles can go a max range of 30 meters
   Duration: until bubbles pop
   Hand Seals/Charge up: Infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: After blowing dozens of bubbles (max 18), the user manipulates them to surround the enemy in all directions. Only the slightest amount of physical contact with an opponent is required to make these bubbles burst, resulting in a small but powerful explosion when they do, this explosion is capable of sending multiple people backwards,  such as it did against Killer b and Naruto in fox cloak form, and can destroy rocks and trees in the surrounding area, if a bubble landed right on an arm or leg it would be capable of blowing that appendage off unless the target has some kind of protection. The user can then make the entirety detonate simultaneously with a snap of their fingers. give bubbles dimensions please
   Weakness: Needs bubble pipe put some real weakness beyond needing an item, that's kind of a given to use Bubble Techniques. This goes for all of them

   Name: Bubble Dome
   Rank: A
   Type:ninjutsu
   Used For: Defense
   Element: Water
   Range: 5 meter radius around self
   Duration: dome can last for 2 posts
   Hand Seals/Charge up: Infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: The user uses Soap Bubble Ninjutsu to create a dome around  themselves and their allies. This dome is shown to be strong enough to resist large explosions, able to take A rank damage, and 2 B ranks before popping.
   Weakness: Needs a bubble pipe

   Name: Water Release bubbles technique-Drift
   Rank: B
   Type: ninjutsu, kind of sensory
   Used For: Kinda defensive?
   Element: water
   Range: 5 meters around self
   Duration: until bubble pops
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infused chakra into bubble pipe
   Description:This technique creates a single, particularly large bubble with the bubble pipe and the user quickly jumps inside. Under their command, the bubble will take them wherever they wish. It's seemingly very capable of both traveling very long distances and floating rather high into the air with no apparent risk of popping. The user can also make the bubble camouflage to hide from anyone who's after them, and the bubble also hides their chakra signature from being sensed from the outside. The user is also able to take people with them via this technique. Upon bursting the bubble to get out of it, the user can use it do damage nearby opponents causing an small explosion. The bubble can take up to 2 B ranks before popping
   Weakness: Needs a bubble pipe.

   Name: Soap Bubble slime
   Rank: C
   Type:ninjutsu
   Used For: offensive
   Element: water
   Range: bubbles have a range of 25 meters
   Duration: until bubbles pop
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: The user blows bubbles (max 12) at an opponent, the bubbles movements can be manipulated at will by the user, and when popped, release a sticky slime, delaying or trapping an opponent. This slime is pretty strong requiring taijustu adept or higher to break out of it, or a c rank technique to destroy it. dimensions  
   Weakness: needs a bubble pipe

   Name: Ink bubble explosion
   Rank: B
   Type: ninjutsu
   Used For: Offensive
   Element: water
   Range: bubbles have a range of 30 meters
   Duration: until bubbles popped
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description:  The user sends a rush of a max of 15 bubbles toward the enemies, which they can control the movements of through thought, the bubbles grow when making contact with an enemy growing in a large bubble that surrounds them, causing them to have the risk to drown, the bubbles then appears to fill themselves up with a black liquid. This black eats away at the body of those inside over the course of 2 posts. The bubble then pops in a black inky splash, killing the enemy and leaving no sign of a corpse behind. The bubbles can take a b rank or 2 c rank attacks before popping.
   Weakness: needs a bubble pipe

   Name: Acid Permeation
   Rank: B
   Type: ninjutsu
   Used For: Offensive
   Element: water
   Range: bubbles have a range of 25 meters
   Duration: until bubbles are popped
   Hand Seals/Charge up: Infuse chakra into bubble blower
   Description: The user blows  a max of 20 small acid bubbles at their opponent, which they can manipulate the movements of. These bubbles can burn and corrode the opponent when popped causing third degree burns.
   Weakness: needs a bubble pipe

   Name: Bubble clone
   Rank: B
   Type: ninjustu
   Used For: offensive
   Element: water
   Range: typical clone range
   Duration: until clone runs out of chakra
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: The user makes a clone of themselves by using his Soap Bubble Ninjutsu with their bubble pipe. When hit, the clone pops causing a small explosion that can send people flying and damage bones. The clone has the same chakra that a shadow clone would, and doesn't need a pipe to perform soap bubble ninjustu.  
   Weakness: needs bubble pipe

   Name: Blinding Bubbles technique
   Rank: C
   Type: ninjutsu
   Used For: defensive
   Element: water
   Range: bubbles have a range of 25 meters
   Duration:  until bubbles pop
   Hand Seals/Charge up: infuse chakra into bubble pipe
   Description: The user blows bubbles that they can control at the opponent. These bubbles surround the opponent. Once popped, the bubbles creates a puff of red powder that momentarily blinds the opponent. The smoke stings the eyes and throat and lasts for 2 posts.
   Weakness: needs bubble pipe

   Name: Soul Bane
   Rank: S rank kinjustu
   Type: genjustu
   Used For: Offensive
   Element:
   Range:  30 meters, though after successfully performing it becomes a village wide justu
   Duration: explained below
   Hand Seals/Charge up: rat-tiger-horse-ram-snake
   Description: This is a powerful genjutsu known to be forbidden among the Konohagakure ninja. Unlike most genjustu is has no sensory trigger instead the user spreads their chakra out over 30 meters and anyone in that range falls under effect. It targets the mind and causes the target to believe that anyone is a foe, except for others under the genjustu, the user, and the user's alliesthey shouldn't be an exception. If they're within the range they should get affected, instead acting like slaves to them. following all their commands can't control other peoples chars. While under the effects of the genjutsu, anyone affected will attack those who they believe to be enemies, even their closest friends. They will act completely coherent, however, almost as if it is of their own volition, but they will not listen to reason. Once defeated, they return to normal with no memory of the events. The genjutsu is cast by the following seals, and when it affects more than a single target the participants do not turn on each other, instead teaming up to attack their friends. This genjutsu is dispelled either by killing the caster, or knocking out the targets.

This justu can be turned into a village wide justu by setting up 4 barriers at 4 points in a village or area. these barriers do not count as part of this jutsu, let it be noted. Meaning they have to be activated and registered separately These barriers have s rank defenses and are capable of taking two s rank attacks before being destroyed, alternatively the user can put someone in charge of the barrier, causing it to not brake unless the person in charge is defeated.  If these four barriers are set up the genjustu will become more potent and the only way to brake others out of it will be to kill the castor, though only a genjustu master could perform this version of the technique. This genjustu can only affect those with a lower or equal chakra pool to the user, and it cannot affect s rank ninja.
   Weakness: canon technique video game techs don't count as canon, because they are severely over powered and usually are stretched

Kagura M wrote:The range, yes it has a good range, but it doesn't do anything but sense, it's not really worth the s ranking if all it is gonna do is make rain and sense, but if you're not gonna change your mind I'll just make a better version that is actually equal of being s rank. cool go for it.

Dimensions placed, and that is the weakness since you cannot just perform them whenever with hand signs and if your pipe is broken you cannot perform, not to mention while you are using the pipe your hands are disabled meaning it is much more likely for you to be attacked and not be able to react than normal, also they are all canon so technically I don't really need to give them one anyways besides that.wasn't under the impression they were canon

For soul bane I think you got something confused, I am not saying that allies will nto be affected by this genjustu, I am saying that people under the genjustu will not attack them, similar to how jabo was not attacked by the people being controlled by Kagura in the game. Also it's nor sreally controlling them, they are like solders, they don't lose their personality or emotions they imply follow what the user says, such as kiba and sakura did in the game when under the effects of the genjustu.


I don't get what you mean by the barrier being a separate tech, they are preforming the soul bane technique, not a different technique, so Idk why I would register them as something different when they give the same result, unless your meaning I have to pay separate cost for them, and intentionally activate them, which is obvious,obvious or not, without it being mentioned it can be taken advantage of not to mention controlling people happens all the time in naruto, through other genjustu, such as the sharigan genjustuhypnosis version isn't on the site, the yamanaka clan,not on the site the nara clan, there is a way to break out of itpuppet masters,limits put on that fuinjustu, memory manipulation etc,this goes beyond it and you worded it like you were actually controlling them it isn't a new or rare concept, in fact compared to other forms this is quite tame costing more than the basic yamanaka and nara technique, and having easier ways out of the justu than fuinjustu or memory manipulation. and you need to add dimensions to the barriers, ranges how far people can be from it all that stuff. Thus why I recommend you make it a separate technique. You are still paying the same chakra cost after all, it's more so for clarification purposes, so yeah please do that