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1Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Sun Apr 20, 2014 4:54 am

Poncho

Poncho
Kumo Chunin
Kumo Chunin

The undeniably sandy village Sunagakure was also undeniably hot as always. The citizens had adapted to the climate with different ways of dressing and things of that nature, but to those foreign to this land it was a new battle. Soon to be a battle within a battle. The sun refused to hold back even by the slightest degree as it persistently blazed on the skin of Junpei Hozuki. He was of course foreign to this climate, but he had made do by constantly keeping himself hydrated by sipping out of his water bottle like a mad man. The plastic black straw once again grazed his lips as he sipped the now warmed water. "Shit . . . " The liquid tasted a bit funny probably due to the water being aged a bit, but he graciously swallowed in hopes of hydration.

His mouth and nose were covered by a black cloth, just like many Suna natives wore and his hair and other features were covered by a tan colored cloak. Others also wore clothing like this, shielding themselves from the sand in the wind and also to insulate whatever cool air they could capture. Surprisingly it was cooler inside the garment than outside, exposed to the heated conditions. His eyes lit up as he trudged through the streets and noticed a small oasis stationed in a small outlet. Others were there like back at the port and many were drinking indicating the liquid was clean.

Junpei withdrew his water bottle and dipped his container in the pool of cool water filling the bottle once more with chilled water. Taking a sip after screwing the lid on, he exhaled into the atmosphere in relief. "Alright, now I feel like I can function . . ." He smuggled the bottle into the shroud of his cloak where he harbored his two prized blades, Sakana and Kiga.

It was now the time to do what he came to do. And what was that? It was to simply cause chaos and disarray. But why? Why would someone pointlessly cause turmoil to innocent people and harm their lives, well because money was involved and as long as funds and a bit of fun came with it, Junpei would do it. His head turned and his hand moved to shield his eyes from the sunlight as he peered up at the Kage Mansion. The three jounin were up there just like his contact told him or at least one was currently visible at the moment.

The chatter and minor bumps and shoves were all ignored as Junpei moved through the crowd to the target building. There the Kazekage would be or at least that's where he usually was. Junpei wasn't interested in this person at the moment though. Well he was, but he wasn't interested in seeking them out, after what he would do they would surely come to him. Arriving a few meters away from the Kage Mansion, Junpei took a seat on a bench near the building. There he surveyed the surveillance patterns of the guards and sized them up a bit. Without a doubt he was going to have to deal with Anbu ninja on the ground level and Jounin on the roof level. There were five Anbu ninja and three Jounin ninja, manageable, but there were also the other ninja in the village to take in account of. It seemed a distraction was in order, something that would alert high ranking ninja and draw them away from the building of interest.

Junpei stood from his seat and checked the sun seeing how much sunlight he had left and it was more than enough. Stretching a bit he moved out of range from ninja eyes, then into an alley way. Checking the area he was alone and he waited a moment to see that he wasn't followed. Forming three handseals, he produced a copy of himself, but a unique copy. Sending the spawn out into the city with a small gift, junpei waited about ten minutes before leaving the alley way himself.

The copy would make his way to the edge of the Sunagakure Gates, but on the village side. Like the original, his features were well hidden, but he also blended in with normal citizens who also dressed the same. The real Junpei moved to the Oasis and stuck a finger in the water as if playing in the liquid a bit. In reality he was refreshing his water supply, for the clone he had created was made of his own liquid, meaning he had lost a bit of hydration.

The clone would now be standing a fair distance away form the village exit, but not in plain site like a sore thumb. Scanning the area, he then saw it, it was in the sky. That thing being a hawk, following it ever so eagerly he found its destination, that of course being the mailing hub of Sunagakure or in other words how the village communicated with other villages, also how citizens mailed their letters and goods.

Junpei would stay in range of the clone careful that it wouldn't disperse do to the limited range. The clone would make his way to the messaging department, but would find it surprising crowded, but joyfully air conditioned. Ah yes the pleasures of technology, it was like magic in a sense. But now was the hard part. Junpei wasn't directed to harm innocents, but he also wasn't directed not to. He didn't find satisfaction in killing random people, well he did, but he typically liked to see their death and butcher them to death, not blow them to pieces. Yes, that's correct blow them to pieces, for the present Junpei had given the clone before they parted ways was a bundle of fourteen explosive tags. Junpei always had to keep one with him, so only fourteen were distributed. But then again innocents being harmed in the process would create more of an epidemic . . . with that thought, the clone began counting.

"25 . . . 26." Twenty six was the number of people not including the workers that were present in this building. It truly was a shame, but what had to be done, had to be done. Detonation occurred on sheer impulse and the blast was seen from the real Junpei's current position. Many gasped and heads snapped to see what the commotion was only to see smoke billowing from the messaging office. Who knows what important info could have been in there, records, shipping list for goods, information on ninjas, blah blah blah, and blah blah blah. it was all gone, whatever was in there that is, including the people, and messenger birds.

Eventually screams and cries filled the streets one by one and eventually the village was in chaos. Junpei's heart began racing in excitement. As he moved along with the panicking civilians, he made sure he was headed in the direction of the Kage Mansion. Others were also flooding in that general direction in search of their homes or maybe loved ones. Looking up he noticed the smoke had begun to block the suns rays and he grinned underneath his covering. What he also noticed while he was looking up, were the undeniable flicker of Sunagakure ninja. Each of them rushing to get to the scene, unaware another was about to spawn as Junpei had arrived to his destination, but saw the doors to the Kage Mansion were being directly guarded by the five Anbu members, but also by a group of about ten more Anbu ninja.

Of course it wouldn't be that easy, it never was, but at the same time it was too easy. A crowd of folks had began to rush the doors of the mansion in sheer panic. What did they hope would come out of the act? Hell if Junpei knew, but he did know he was trained to take advantage of moments like this.

In the bulk of the crowd he hid his shifting hands as he once again made performed a signature and unique jutsu. This would give away what village he was from, but that didn't disturb him for his ties with Yukigakure had been cut. Just like the effects the Hidden Mist jutsu had, this jutsu soon made the area almost a whiteout. But instead of hazy mist, it was thick ivory snow. It was about the same temperature as rain, but it fell lightly. And as it fell, time seemed to stop. Junpei followed the act of the civilians and acted baffled, as if he had never seen the flakes in his life. His head was directed at the sky as were the villagers and even some of the Anbu ninja.

Then suddenly the light snow got heavier, then heavier, and before they knew it, the village Sunagakure was experiencing their first ever blizzard. The snow fall was manageable because it only felt like a light drizzle, but now this scale of snowfall felt like a rainstorm. Each flake thick in mass, stuck to the sandy streets and began to pile up and people panicked and more and more piled up at the doors of the Kage Mansion. They wanted and explanation, where was there Kage at in their time of need and confusion? Junpei struggled to move out the crowd and miraculously squeezed into an alleyway.

The village was rapidly starting to look more and more like Yukigakure and that please Junpei. The snow kept him hydrated and would also help mask his presence. Slipping out of his sand colored cloak, he tossed the covering into the snow and it was quickly buried in white. He was only about a meter away from the crowd, but he could barely make out bodies, he only heard their undecipherable yells. It made him grin once more as he appeared in his normal wear and had his Yukigakure Anbu gear on under. Kicking his foot in the snow digging a small pit, he tossed the both of his blades Sakana and Kiga in the pit and allowed the still falling snow to hide them. Making a mental note of where he was, he then disappeared from existence becoming a puddle of water. Falling into the snow, he moved at nearly untraceable speeds being able to travel in the form of moisture. And obviously the whole village had become sheeted with moisture making the village his playground.

Moving to the back of the Kage Mansion he noticed no guard in the back, but assumed the three Jounin were probably still on top. Solidifying he applied chakra to his feet and ran up the side of the solid wall until he almost reached the top. Turning into water once more, he slid into the snow and still in the cover of the blizzard, he scanned the Mansions peak. The three Jounin were indeed up there, but there was also one man stationed in the center wearing an Anbu mask. Junpei then lessened the snowfall from the outside of the Village and moved that portion to this building top alone. Vision was cut drastically and the four ninja on the roof took note of it. They must have been familiar with the Hidden Mist Technique, for they easily and almost instantly moved into a defensive formation. Forming a triangle around the Anbu member, the Jounin each withdrew a Kunai and the Anbu member made the tiger seal. "Shit he's sensing." Junpei immediately spawned out of the snow facing the back of the Anbu ninja. This also put him face to face with one of the Jounin. "Here!" He shouted as Junpei spawned, but in mid swing with his blade Holmgang. That Jounin had jumped back and also pushed the Anbu member back avoiding the horizontal swing that bisected the two of his allies. "Dammit . . ." The Demon muttered as he phased back into being one with the snow. The snow was now smeared red streaks from the two dead ninjas. Since the snow had only stuck to the roof Junpei was only limited to moving on the roof while in his water form, but his enemies didn't know that.

"Gotta get the sensor first." He moved unnoticeable in the snow before emerging in front of the masked ninja and piercing him straight through the torso. A kunai was in his left hand since his right hand was wielding Holmgang. With a flick of his left arm he sent the metal blade towards his mark whose vision was obscured from the thick blizzard like snow. Crimson liquid flowed from his neck as he gurgled gripping the kunai in his neck. "Pulling it out will only kill you faster." Junpei spoke through his facial covering as he walked over to the dying ninja with Holmgang over his shoulder. The man pulled the knife out of his neck then in a raspy voice blood spew out his mouth. Junpei chuckled before moving Holmgang off of his shoulder down onto the neck of the shinobi beheading him.

What now? Junpei had no idea, all that was left was to wait for a response. He once again spread the range of his jutsu to cover the village then leap to a building top across the road from the Kage Mansion. In the cover of the blizzard he simply waited for the village to respond. He could only make out a massive blob of bodies waiting in front of the Kage Mansion. The same ninja's were on guard and unaware of the events that unfolded on the roof. Sadly, the village was probably still responding to the explosion that happened previously.

Chakra Stuff:


Word Count:2267/8000

2Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Mon Apr 21, 2014 1:27 am

Raphael

Raphael
Konoha Chunin
Konoha Chunin

OCC: First things first. The villagers wouldn't flood the Kage Mansion. For one this is a major village so that means there would be a plan for a attack on the village. The villagers would head to the designated areas. As far as the Anbu being distracted by anything after a explosion happened within the village wouldn't happen. They are disciplined like the queensguard so...yeah...Another thing that i find a bit off is that the anbu you killed so easily was a sensor. So you would assume that he/she is is a Sensory Master or at least Adept, so undetectable is a stretch you killing them isn't the problem it just that you made it happen so easily. Same with the three jounin that would have to be a long blade to kill two of the three with one swing. Not only that but sharp as all hell, also it could be assumed that it gave time to let the 2nd jounin react and escape with a wound of some kind instead of being decapitated.

3Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Mon Apr 21, 2014 5:38 am

Kid Koopa

Kid Koopa
Kumo Genin
Kumo Genin

OOC: I don't do OOC combat to cancel my actions, you wanna change what ahppened, do it by posting In character not by saying "edit this edit that." The Anbu I say I "immediately" attacked, so as soon as I assumed he was a sensor(Occuring as soon as he made the tiger seal) I attacked without hesitation from his backside. And research he weapon before you say it would have to be a long blade before I can do anything, because the sword is 6ft long. It is also A-Rank and the size of the Executioner Blade, so yes it can cut through two people just like that. Then lastly, I approached from 6 o'clock and they were facing 2 and ten o'clock, meaning not in my direction, so unless he can react that fast to something he can't even see(there is a blizzard going on) he got chopped in half along with the first guy.

4Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Mon Apr 21, 2014 10:28 pm

Raphael

Raphael
Konoha Chunin
Konoha Chunin

OOC: So be it.

It was another peaceful day in Sunagakure. The city streets were bustling with the usual amount of pedestrians. The shinobi of the village were at multiple vantage points keeping watch over the village. Tear himself was dressed in his casual wear and was standing in the lookout post that the Kage's Mansion provided. This lookout was unseen by those who did not know of its existence. Tear looked out at the village before suddenly hearing a massive explosion followed by a cloud of smoke. Based on were it was the explosion came from the mail station. The first thing that came to the mind of the battle seasoned sihnobi was a terrorist attack. Luckily a plan was set in play for this very moment. Although frantic each citizen and frequent traveler flooded into the emergency bunkers.

The anbu however headed straight to the Kage Mansion as well as a group of jounin. The Anbu Black ops however went straight to the bunker to get to their Kazekage. At the same time the intelligence division began scanning over the village using their sensory skills. They did this in order to find any "foreign" chakra signatures that did not belong in the area. At the same time as all this was going on it began to snow, which then turned into a blizzard. "Looks like we have a uninvited quest everyone." Tear said looking at the ongoing blizzard. The anbu and jounin in front of the mansion then noticed a man not to far away from them. Everyone should have been in the bunkers, but this man was on the street. This alone was suspicious. So two of the anbu and 1 of the jounin quickly approached the man. "What are you doing? Every citizen was instructed to go to the bunkers in case of a situation like this.?" Considering the Kage's word was law here and everyone knew that this man should have been in a bunker.



Last edited by Raphael on Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:47 am; edited 1 time in total

5Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Tue Apr 22, 2014 9:00 am

Poncho

Poncho
Kumo Chunin
Kumo Chunin

OOC: Regaining chakra from one use of Hydrification Technique since actions were voided. Also I'm not sure how you have a lookout post that's unnoticeable. A lookout post is used to look over the village, meaning you can see them and they can also see where the lookout post is, it can't just be unnoticeable, doesn't really make sense.

Though Junpei could have followed the crowd like a smart ninja and found himself in the bunker in safety from the threat that was himself, he acted like a smarter ninja and decided to face the forces of Sunagakure head on. There he was in front of the Kage Mansion, the only thing in between him and the building was, a couple of ninja, and the heavy snowfall. This snowfall suddenly became heavier however and made it seem as if Junpei had phased out of vision for a moment. In that moment he was not visible he had made the correct handseals to make another Hydrification Clone and to utilize the Hydrification Technique. His weapons would be retrieved by the clone and smuggled within its body in an instant with the clone being able to sift between solid and liquid in instants. Junpei would be in the snow in the form of water leaving the clone to act as him while he would move in his liquid state behind the guards. Once behind the guards he would also extend a small tentacle like stream and he would silently filter himself in the keyhole of the Kage Mansion until he was on the other side of the door, meaning successfully inside the building.

The clone would still be standing outside in the blizzard entertaining the guards who would be unaware that Junpei had infiltrated the building and unaware that the being in front of them was a clone for the blizzard had masked the substitution. "I'm here to have a word with the Kazekage, can you help me fulfill this request?" Those would be the words of the clone. Meanwhile Junpei would be solidifying to see no one on the inside on the Kage Mansion. Quietly sneaking up the stairs, he would slip his Yukigakure Anbu Mask on his face and move with his ears open for any sounds at all.  Yes the intelligence division would be sensing for his chakra, but even if they sensed that he had moved into the mansion, how would they alert someone? They would have to come out of the room they were in and go tell the Kage themselves. And that's exactly what Junpei was waiting for. It was such an easy mistake to make that could seal the fate of this village. But if they chose to stay in their room, Junpei had no issue with waiting and allowing his clone to play with the guards outside that would also be uninformed that Junpei was in the Kage Mansion. Junpei also had the urge to just flood the whole damn building and watch everyone drown while he became one with the water and escaped scott free.

Chakra Stuff:

Word Count: 2,715/8,000

6Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:19 am

Raphael

Raphael
Konoha Chunin
Konoha Chunin

"No, i'll escort you to the bunker." replied one of the jounin while grabbing the man by the arm. The Anbu never really noticing the foreign substance entering the building. That was until a jounin level shinobi appeared before the Anbu that stood guard in front of the Kage Mansion. "The person responsible is in the area. There is a possibility they got in the building." The Anbu looked each other as 6 of the remaining 9 went inside of the building leaving the other 2 to disperse and search around the building. Tear sighed as on of the Anbu Black ops around him handed him his Katana. Tear wanted to investigate, but he did not feel like leaving himself so he decided to make a clone. Quickly forming a hand sign a clone appeared next to him. The clone and 2 of the anbu black ops vanished from the room. As they moved through the mansion their senses were peaked and they remained alert and ready for anything.

Jutsu used:

Tear's Chakra | 275/300
Clones Chakra | 250/250

7Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:30 am

Kid Koopa

Kid Koopa
Kumo Genin
Kumo Genin

OOC: Stop the bs lmao, there is no logic reason for you to send people inside with some magical ass assumption that I somehow infiltrated the building, when "I'm" right in front of you or according to your post in your hand eing lead to the bunker. You show no thought leading up to the statement either, you just say "Hey maybe he got in somehow even though he's right here." Stop the meta gaming, make a legit post or I will meta game back, and I don't think you'd like the conclusion.

8Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:33 am

Raphael

Raphael
Konoha Chunin
Konoha Chunin

OOc: For one thing it's not magical, its a assumption. If your in the area then it is possible you got in the building. In my post i say nothing about you being around me. I state they are ready for anything so that in your next post they wouldnt be ambushed to badly if you decided to run into them. I'm not meta gaming and i'm not gonna let you do whatever you want. This is a major village in which protecting the Kage takes priority, so they would act accordingly...

9Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Wed Apr 23, 2014 7:06 am

Poncho

Poncho
Kumo Chunin
Kumo Chunin

The hallways were silent, as was the whole building, except for the sound of a door opening. "What the fuck?" Junpei hadn't received a signal or information from his clone, so he knew the entity was still intact, but for some reason they were searching the building. "The Gods must be guiding their minds and actions." That's the only explanation Junpei had for this celestial action that just happened. Maybe the Gods were indeed against him and gave the enemy normal unknown information, but none of it mattered. Junpei kept his cool and his mind straight, if he got paranoid and fritzy now all would be lost. The beings downstairs were fairly quiet, seemingly trying to get the stealth drop on him as well, so he would pace up the stairs backwards, facing the way he came. That was until, he heard a peculiar noise. It was the sound of a clone spawning maybe. Possibly shadow, he was positive it was a shadow clone from the unique noise it typically made, a noise that was basically impossible to mimic, even in his mind he found it hard. His neck moved to direct his head in the direction the clone was formed and he thought out his next moves carefully.

His hands paced through the seals as a grin emerged from underneath his mask. Removing the covering he then open his jaw to amazing measures to give birth to a might deluge. Waters strong enough to sweep away trees and with enough volume to quench the thirst of the driest of deserts. The water would pump from his mouth quickly with the eagerness of a wrathful sea, hungry for pirates and stranded sailors and today its prey were Sunagakure Ninjas. Smashing against the walls the water would rush down the stairs to carry the ninja's away against another vertical surface. Only a minimum amount of the water would leak out from the small bit of space under the door and the keyhole from which Junpei entered. The rest would contribute to rising the water levels until they would fill the building to the brim, no more, but a bit less. Those behind doors would be safe for a small amount of time, as the water would begin to squeeze in from the bottom of the doors and through the keyholes if they had any. This would be if they weren't open, but for the room the Kage was hiding in, his door was just opened from his clone and its company, meaning it would be flooded in a flash and if he didn't take immediate action of doing God knows what he would find himself at risk of drowning along with his subordinates. Junpei however would have accessed his signature Hydrification technique and would be moving about the sea that was present in the building. He would be invisible however as he would be in his liquid state, but to add to that he would be able to move at extreme speed from having so much water to move through.

Being a smart ninja he of course knew the face of his target, so while ignoring the minor threats and those who weren't the Kazekage, Junpei found his target in no time. The clone was not noticed however, reason being because the force of the water jutsu would have dispelled the fragile distraction. It was an S-Rank technique of course, so the force it was delivered with was brutal. Especially brutal to those who were below Junpei and had just entered the building.

Anyhow, within the watery room the Kazekage was residing in if he was still present, before any others could enter, the entrances would be closed, by Junpei who had briefly solidified. Once the doors were closed, he would once again return to the liquid invisible state. Then once behind the man he would return to his solid state with his finger very close the back of his head, no hesitation was present in the cannibals actions as he simply and without a flinch or blink shot a dense bullet of chakra through his finger tip. This bullet would proceed to travel through the small barely existing gap of space and pierce the Kazekage's head from the back and exit from the front given he didn't move to take defensive action. "Pew pew . . ." Spoke the Demon of the Mist. This was known as the Water Gun jutsu and it was a very practical one at that, one of Junpei's personal favorites.

If the bullet had hit its mark and the ninja's blood would begin to taint the water Junpei would scavenge what he could off of him and exit the building via Hydrification Technique, meaning his exit would be unnoticeable by the normal eye. Once outside the building he would solidify and find no one was around, with the two ninja's who were left outside to search still making a round around the building.

Chakra Stuff:

10Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Wed Apr 23, 2014 11:32 pm

Raphael

Raphael
Konoha Chunin
Konoha Chunin

A sudden noise was heard by the clone and the two anbu that escorted him before long they looked up the long hallway that hey traversed and saw a giant wave of water. The two anbu that escorted the clone of their kage formed hand signs and slammed their hands into the ground causing the ground in front of them to rise and rip through the kage's mansion which caused earth to form a giant structure of chakra infused stopping might. This alerted the other jounin and anbu who were outside and who had just entered the building as well as Tear himself that the intruder was most likely in the building. The earth caused the water to slam into the giant gate looking wall that had ripped through that part of the building, unable to go beyond that point. The jounin and anbu of Sunagakure that heard the noise or who were able to hear it converged on the kage's mansion. Tear stood in the room with his katana drawn and the 3 anbu with him stayed at the ready.

Tear's Chakra | 275/300
Clones Chakra | 250/250
Anbu #1 Chakra | 225/250
Anbu #2 Chakra | 225/250

Jutsu Used:

11Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Thu Apr 24, 2014 12:57 am

Poncho

Poncho
Kumo Chunin
Kumo Chunin

OOC: regaining 1 A-Rank and 2 D-Ranks worth of chakra.

Junpei noticed that his water the was meant to move up the building was flowing back down meaning something was blocking it, definitely not what he needed to happen, so he would go to fix it only after finishing his jutsu however. Spraying the rest of the water down the stairs it would eventually force the doors down stairs open. Normally the water would go to flood the streets, but for this jutsu it would form into a giant water dome 40m around the Kage Mansion. This would also inhabit the area that Junpei's clone was operating in, but sense they weren't on the edge of the jutsu's range, they would be swept away to it. Meaning all in the area would be 40m away from the Kage Mansion, except those behind the earthen wall and Junpei who had liquified to move and position himself on the roof of the Kage Mansion, but after getting a breathe of fresh air.

Junpei's clone would also act in a similar manner, using the Hydrification Technique to meet Junpei atop the Kage mansion to see that the original had also summoned the great blade Holmgang. What he was doing with the oversized greatsword was carving a gigantic circle out, probably with a 6m radius, meaning 12m all around. Placing his last explosive tag on the top of the building, he moved a safe distance away and detonated it. The surface was already weakened from his blade so a large opening than normal was created from the explosion, allowing the water from the dome surrounding the mansion to pour in. It took about half a minute for the water to stop pouring in, meaning the building had been flooded, including the rooms, for the water pressure would have pressed the doors open. For the Anbu members and the clone, they would find themselves slammed against the earthen wall they created, meaning the clone would be dispelled and the Anbu members would suffer a bit of head trauma, at the least enough to set off their equilibrium. Along with the Kazekage and his company, they would find themselves submerged fully underwater.

After the thirty seconds were up, Junpei would once again use the Hydrification Technique to join his clone in its liquid state and to also send Holmgang back inside his body. Swimming about the building at a monstrous pace while also not visible to the normal eye, they would locate the watery blue room where the Kazekage and his ninja were. They two may have suffered damage to a degree from the water rushing into the room, moving furniture, desk, anything in towards the wall opposite of the door. This would mean the bodies would also be slammed against the wall.

Still invisible they located the Kazekage's location and saw he was with three others. No communication was needed as the clone moved to the front corner of the room and solidified. Junpei would solidify above the group pressed against the ceiling with his fingers already prepared.
Each had five bullets so in total that made ten, as they each fired four at the Kazekage and his guards. The targeted area would of course be the head, going for the instant kill like any smart assassin would and the Kazekage would be the first person targeted. Eight bullets made of water, so only noticeable by the very faint distortion in the water, would launch at murderous speeds to kill the room Sunagakure inhabitants. With the positioning of the assassins, Junpei's clone would more than likely be the only one noticed, so Junpei's bullets wouldn't even be noticed as they approached. With each assassin having one bullet left, if a dodge or defensive maneuver was executed by the Kazekage specifically, they would be launched at him with no mercy.

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12Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Thu Apr 24, 2014 1:21 am

Raphael

Raphael
Konoha Chunin
Konoha Chunin

After the wall was created the anbu and the clone quickly moved back towards Tear and told them off what was going on. The anbu and Tear quickly exited the building through the window that was in the room. They went to the roof of a nearby building. The anbu and jounin who converged on the building stopped right before reaching the building as they saw their kage standing atop of a roof. They themselves moved to him. The anbu who had entered the building came flooding out along with the water, but quickly found themselves standing atop of the water and moving towards the kage in a poof of smoke. Tear who was now surrounded by 5 Anbu black ops and 8 Anbu members along with several jounin stood atop various building close together. The jounin who had grabbed the man earlier were still holding him by the arm and were heading towards a bunker until someone from the intelligence division had appeared before them and informed them that this man was the intruder and had done acts of terrorism towards the kage. The jounin then slit the mans neck only to find out it was a clone. As tear and his subordinates stood on top of the buildings they saw a single man appear on top of the kage's mansion. They figured he was the culprit due to his clothing without a word they all sent various types of jutsu at the man. Survival was unlikely.

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Jutsu used:

13Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Thu Apr 24, 2014 1:56 am

Poncho

Poncho
Kumo Chunin
Kumo Chunin

Sadly there was no 'standing atop' this water. From the water formed into a dome and not a flat surface like most water jutsu did. Then to add to things, the dome was 40m around the Kage Mansion, also encompassing the roof that the Kazekage would have moved to, meaning he was submerged under water along with his company. Then as stated, the clone being lead to the bunker had liquified as the S-Rank water jutsu came and swept away his escorts, so he was intact and in good health as was Junpei who was in his Hydirifcation form meaning invisible along with his clone, but wait . . . what was this. On his way to the roof it seemed the Kage had escaped the mansion, but hadn't escaped the dome of water that was Junpei's jutsu. Seeing the building the Kage was atop of, the clone would infiltrate the structure and position himself underneath the Kage and his ninja. Solidifying the clone paced through handseals and made a unique shark shaped one aimed upwards. This was another S-Rank jutsu, capable of combating many other powerful jutsu and killing many.

Junpei would still be in his liquid state, but a safe distance away hovering over the Kage mansion ready to watch the destruction. Back to the clone. As his jutsu was unleashed the roof of the building he was under would be obliterated as would those who stood atop it. The perk with this jutsu being that it absorbed chakra of those it hit and of jutsu that opposed it, then used that chakra to grow stronger. So each of those ninja on the roof of that building that were struck contributed to making the jutsu hit harder than ever before, surely killing each and every one of them in one strike leaving their bodies in a horrid battered and crushed state.

Chakra Stuff:

14Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Thu Apr 24, 2014 2:18 am

Suna no Kai

Suna no Kai
D-rank missing ninja
D-rank missing ninja

This thread is on hold for evaluation. No one is allowed to post until the review is done.

15Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Empty Re: Driven by Hunger[Invasion] Thu Apr 24, 2014 10:39 pm

Suna no Kai

Suna no Kai
D-rank missing ninja
D-rank missing ninja

Addressed to Poncho's character, Junpei. I had Neru help me with the reviewing process.

Junpei's First Post:

Ok. There are a few things that bug me from reading that post. One has to remember this is the Kage that is being targeted/sought out, not some random shinobi. Junpei caused an explosion to draw attention and forces away and make it somewhat easier for him to do what he had to do. However. Let's put an example. The U.S. president always has a fair number of secret service agents around him, with others spread in other areas around the compound. If someone was to attack the white house, and they started by setting off a bomb in the outskirts, the smallest part of the secret service would go. Police, military, etc, would be sent first (Jounins, Chunins, etc). Most if not all of the secret service would be rushed to literally surround the president. Even if the attack was not meant for him or others got hurt, he is priority. In essence, the explosion Junpei cause should not be enough to leave the Kage with less protection. In fact, I assume in my village, some jounin might have left, and the genin would have been instructed to search for survivors and carry the wounded to the hospital. However, from the shadows, as they most often work, the complete whole of the anbu would have instantly surrounded the building the kage is in. Just because. No matter what. Heck, some of the strongest jounin would have too. Even in the anime, where tons of shinobi where invading, where there were tons of explosions and tons of summoning creatures causing chaos, a lot of the jounin wanted to stay by the kage, and the kage himself had a lot of anbu by him. On top of that, sensing is something some ninjas do. A lot of the Anbu that should have been present would have been efficient with it. Its difficult to believe, specially after the commotion from the explosion that would have made it clear for the anbu that surrounding the kage in case protection was needed, that they would not have sensed and looked to notice the chakra moving through the snow. What really took me by surprise was the ease with which Junpei took down not one but a group of Jounin. If im not mistaken, they should all have been around his own rank, but he cut throw them like butter in a matter of seconds. Heck, last thread i made where Neru, in the past, fought someone of about her rank and power, though she indeed defeated him and toyed with him, it took a bit more. I mean...i'd think some effort would have been needed because it looks like he just took care of genins instead. And, lets just add that on top of all the previous, the fact that snow was falling...in the desert..would have also been more than enough indication of foreign presence and enough to completely fill the kage area with anbu...

Junpei's Second Post: OOC...

Junpei's Third Post: Once again, lets just place all of the Anbu and most of the Jounin by the Kage area since that's how it would/should be. An explosion, snowy mist, people likeloy dead and somehow a few jounin killed by someone who is not supposed to be much stronger than them...yea, the whole totality of the anbu force and the jounin would not be distracted by one individual [the clone] asking to speak to the Kage. Junpei would have been found long before he had time to sneak in or make the clone, and even if he hadn't, given the sheer number of anbu and jounin, once he made it inside, he would have been met by at least 10 or more anbu or jounin of equal or higher skill than him.... there are dedicated sensors after all, specially in the anbu [again reflection what would happen in a village 'my village & likely others']

Junpei's Fourth Post: OOC...But, Ralph has all the reason to have people inside...i don't understand what Jun means. It just makes sense the Anbu are not retards. Obviously, the explosion, and the snow and all the other crap would have been done for a reason. And all of a sudden an individual, [the clone] acting so passive. They have all the reason to be weary and send people to look out for their kage...their duty... In essence I see Junpei getting frustrated that things are not easier/simple but he fails to remember he is not infiltrating a loli house... this is one of the major villages. Heck, it baffles me how Ralph has even allowed him to get as far as he has. Junpei would have been dealt with long before he would have ever got a glimpse of the Kage, given his level. If some random lolninja could just blitz in when he wanted and lolstomp on numerous ninjas his own level and get to see the kage so easily well... I don't need to finish it, do i?

Junpei's Fifth Post: He says his water jutsu took away most ninjas in the area, and if his attack on the kazekage had been successful, thus killing him, he would exit using his hydrification tech and find no one really outside....what. No. I'd think from nearly a 100 anbu/jounin, some may be able to use an earth tech or...jump to avoid the water as likely not all anbu were so easily brushed away. Would the building really be left all alone, the Kage building, during a violent event such as this, so easily, for the enemy to escape, from where the kage was, so easily... [you see my point].

Junpei's Sixth Post: Junpei would eventually, at the end of the post become hard to see, [not invisible to a sensor], but at the beginning, given all the things he had to do, one would think he was rather visible standing atop the mansion. Anyways, with the water dome and its dimensions created, while it would certainly incapacitate some, it would mean quite a lot of ninja would be caught inside. That being said, much like in canon, since the user cannot monitor so many from escaping the water dome at once, it'd be simple for a few anbus of obviously equal rank to engage him while others carried the kage to safety without problem.

Junpei's Seventh Post: Not much more to say that hasn't already been reiterated. Though in liquid form and performing seals, he is still very much noticeable by a sensor.

Responses to this were made using my view as a member and as a Kage seeing what would happen in the village and what has happened in the show. As specified, I have focused only on Jun's posts while you will have focused on Ralph's.

Addressed to Sloth:

You don't get such a lengthy review because most of your actions were based around Jun's. What I do wanna say is you should not have entertained this for as long as you did. Next time this kinda of problem arises, PM a staff member not part of the thread. It shall rescue you from future trouble like this one.

Thus with the review concluded, I say this thread is a void. You can try to argue this with me, either on here or PM. I shall listen.

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