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1Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Konoha's #1 Coward Wed Oct 29, 2014 1:42 am

Itome Hikaraku

Itome Hikaraku
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Southern Fowl Art: Graceful Slash
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Suiton
Range: Self
Duration: A post
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: First, Sora focuses chakra into his hand, causing a thin layer of Suiton to form. The water is constantly circulating, from the beginning of his hand to the end in order to make sure he isn't losing chajra. The thin layer of capable of slicing through limbs like a blade.
Weakness: Only able to be used five times per post.

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Paint Brush: A Work of Art
Rank: D
Type: Nin
Used For: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: Self
Duration: Maintanable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Tiger
Description: Using the power of suiton, Sora doesn't require a canvas or any sort of ink in order to create his works of art. Draws at his current Ninjutsu Specialization level.
Weakness: Even an attack as weak as an E-rank Doton skill can stop this.

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Anti-Shinobi Missile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu/Sensory
Used For: Offensive
Element: Suiton
Range: 35 meters
Duration: One
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: A simple glob of water about the size of a basketball similar to the Suiton: Teppodama technique, with additional killing power and the ability to home in on an opponent's chakra without Sora having to control it past firing it.
Weakness: Loses the homing aspect against similar level sensors who're suppressing themselves. Beaten against C-rank and lower Doton skills. Requires concentration.



Last edited by Itome Hikaraku on Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:13 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Wed Oct 29, 2014 6:07 am

Siegfried

Siegfried

  • Suppression | Go post this in the jutsu grading topic for canon techniques since Chakra Suppression Technique is already a Canon technique
  • Graceful Slash | More explanation. What you have is inadequate and vague
  • Paint Brush: A Work of Art | APPROVED (unless otherwise said)
  • Anti-Shinobi Missile | More weaknesses need to be stated

3Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Wed Oct 29, 2014 8:19 am

Itome Hikaraku

Itome Hikaraku
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Advanced Deflect
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Used For: Defensive
Element: None
Range: Self
Duration: 1 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: Sora redirects the path of a Taijutsu or Weaponry attack with one of his hands, brushing it aside to keep himself from harm, and leaving an opening in the opponent's guard. Speed is increased by an additional tier for this attack and the follow up. When Sora hits Master, his speed will be better then other Masters of his level.
Weakness: The follow up must be a Taijutsu attack. Requires close range.

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Boxing
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Self
Duration: Maintanable
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: Getting into a standard Boxing Stance, the speed and strength of his hands are increased by an additional tier, Also, Jutsu under the "Boxing" branch of technique are increased by an additional rank.
Weakness: Unfortunately, the power of his kicks are lowered by a tier due to the lack of emphasis on kicks in boxing.  But because footwork is so important in martial arts, it does not effect his speed. Also, the bonus only applies to punches.


Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Boxing Art: Tornado Upper
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Suiton
Range: Self
Duration: One
Hand Seals/Charge up:
Description: An enhanced uppercut with a torrent of water swirling around the fist, capable of making cuts along the opponents body about an inch deep. Most of the power comes from the uppercut.
Weakness: Only 10 per thread, causes minor recoil to the user in the form of small cuts and bruises.

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Boxing Art: Right Hook
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: No
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: A quick and powerful  punch that strikes in the jaw, possibly shattering it, and in extreme cases, killing the opponent if there body is weak enough.
Weakness: Ten per thread



Last edited by Itome Hikaraku on Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:12 pm; edited 7 times in total

4Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Thu Oct 30, 2014 12:28 am

Itome Hikaraku

Itome Hikaraku
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Iron Body
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu(Bonus from Taijutsu)
Used For: Defensive
Element: None
Range: Self
Duration: Maintainable
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: Focusing his chakra while also maintaining clear focus, the damage from jutsu is reduced significantly, giving his body the defensive capabilities of a B-rank armor. He is able to take 3 B-rank attacks before this armor wears away completely, reducing he strength of these attacks to D-rank.
Weakness: Weak to Katon and raiton(The burns and electrocution bypass the armor)



Last edited by Itome Hikaraku on Thu Oct 30, 2014 4:08 am; edited 1 time in total

5Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Thu Oct 30, 2014 3:50 am

V

V
Konoha Jounin
Konoha Jounin

Name: Iron Body
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu(Bonus from Taijutsu)
Used For: Defensive
Element: None
Range: Self
Duration: Maintainable
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: Focusing his chakra while also maintaining clear focus, the damage from jutsu is reduced significantly, giving his body the defensive capabilities of a B-rank armor.
Weakness: Weak to Katon and raiton(The burns and electrocution bypass the armor)
For this jutsu, your chakra armour, if you want it to be kept up at a Maintainable duration, would only be able to reduce the power of B-ranks (that aren't Katon or Raiton) to D-rank in power. And it can only protect you against three B-ranks before your defense wears away completely.


For Right Hook and Tornado Upper, shouldn't it be that the attacks can only be used a certain number of times per thread?

Name: Boxing
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Self
Duration: Maintanable
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: Getting into a standard Boxing Stance, the speed and strength of his punches are increased by an additional tier, Also, Jutsu under the "Boxing" branch of technique are increased by an additional rank.
Weakness: Unfortunately, the power of his kicks are lowered by a tier due to the lack of emphasis on kicks in boxing. But because footwork is so important in martial arts, it does not effect his speed. Also, the bonus only applies to punches.
You could either bump this to B-rank, or take out the fact that your boxing techniques are increased by an additional rank.

Name: Advanced Deflect
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Used For: Defensive
Element: None
Range: Self
Duration: 1 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: Sora redirects the path of a Taijutsu or Weaponry attack with one of his hands, brushing it aside to keep himself from harm, and leaving an opening in the opponent's guard. Speed is increased by an additional tier for this attack and the follow up. When Sora hits Master, his speed will be better then other Masters of his level.
Weakness: The follow up must be a Taijutsu attack. Requires close range.
This isn't a technique that automatically allows you to redirect the path of a Taijutsu/Weaponry attack right? You have to be realistically capable of doing that to whatever attack comes your way before this technique actually takes placez. Otherwise, this is approved


6Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Thu Oct 30, 2014 4:09 am

Itome Hikaraku

Itome Hikaraku
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

Editted. And yeah, Advanced Deflect only works if it can logically be used.

7Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Fri Oct 31, 2014 1:31 am

V

V
Konoha Jounin
Konoha Jounin

Tornado Upper: Add in additional weakness like after use you'll have scratches or minor cuts over your hand or something.

The other jutsus that I've checked are approved, and either Siegfried or I would mod your first set of jutsus...

8Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Fri Oct 31, 2014 5:04 am

Siegfried

Siegfried

Itome Hikaraku wrote:
Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Southern Fowl Art: Graceful Slash
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Suiton
Range: Self
Duration: A post
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: First, Sora focuses chakra into his hand, causing a thin layer of Suiton to form. The water is constantly circulating, from the beginning of his hand to the end in order to make sure he isn't losing chajra. The thin layer of capable of slicing through limbs like a blade.
Weakness: Only able to be used five times per post.

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Paint Brush: A Work of Art
Rank: D
Type: Nin
Used For: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: 10m
Duration: Maintanable
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: Using the power of suiton, Sora doesn't require a canvas or any sort of ink in order to create his works of art. Draws at his current Ninjutsu Specialization level.
Weakness: Even an attack as weak as an E-rank Doton skill can stop this.

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Anti-Shinobi Missile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu/Sensory
Used For: Offensive
Element: Suiton
Range: 35 meters
Duration: One
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: A simple glob of water about the size of a basketball similar to the Suiton: Teppodama technique, with additional killing power and the ability to home in on an opponent's chakra without Sora having to control it past firing it.
Weakness: Loses the homing aspect against similar level sensors who're suppressing themselves. Beaten against C-rank and lower Doton skills.

Will break of concentration disrupt the last technique's effectiveness?

That first technique's not sitting right with me. I may have to receive a second opinion before I approve.

9Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Fri Oct 31, 2014 5:19 am

Itome Hikaraku

Itome Hikaraku
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

1: Yes

2: hehehe ur lil lava armor willbdie

10Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Fri Oct 31, 2014 5:22 am

Siegfried

Siegfried

Then that Anti-Shinobi missile technique is approved

11Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Sat Nov 15, 2014 10:47 pm

Akira

Akira

Souther Fowl Art: Graceful Slash- Unapproved. This needs a cooldown.

Paint Brush: A Work of Art- Unapproved. Needs Hand seals. Range should be yourself.

Anti-Shinobi Missile- Unapproved. This needs hand seals. You will also need a technique for homing on a target’s chakra. You will need to give us a way how chakra can be distinguish. Range needs to be decreased

Advanced Deflect- Unapproved. There is no real reason for this to give you a tier advantage.

Boxing- This tech is fine. Still Approved

Boxing: Tornado Upper- Get rid of the caple of bein knocked out or kill part. That's obvious and doesn't really need to be said. Other than that this tech is fine.

Boxing: Right Hook- Still Approved.

Iron Body- Unapproved. You can raise the attacks to C not D. Also, you will need to add a charge up or hand seals.

12Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:14 pm

Itome Hikaraku

Itome Hikaraku
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

Fixed Tornado Upper and A Work of Art.. :/

13Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Sun Nov 16, 2014 7:49 pm

Akira

Akira

Paint Brush: A Work of Art- Approved

Boxing: Tornado Upper- Approved

14Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Thu Nov 20, 2014 7:14 pm

Itome Hikaraku

Itome Hikaraku
Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Bubble Shot
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Defense
Element: Water
Range: 25m
Duration: 3 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: None, requires a bubble blower
Description: A single bubble fired from a bubble blower. It is about the size of a baseball, and when it hits its target, it causes an explosion the size of a single meter. It is strong enough to blow off a limb. Travels the speed of Sora's ninjutsu specialization.
Weakness: It's small size makes it easier to dodge. D-rank attacks can easily pop it.

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Suiton: Big Geyser Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offense
Element: Suiton
Range: 40m vertically, 10m horizontally.
Duration: One post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Two
Description: After doing the needed handseals, Sora unleashes a geyser of water from the ground. The geyser has the strength to carry up to 1000 pounds, moving at the speed of Sora's Ninjutsu specialization. It is also extremely hot, causing third degree burns on the area affected by the geyser.
Weakness: Does no damage besides the burns, can't break through c-rank Doton techs and lower.

Konoha's #1 Coward  73m2

Name: Suiton: Bubble Blower
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offense
Element: Suiton
Range: Self Post
Duration: Maintainable
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: Sora forms a simple bubble blower capable of blowing bubbles. Useless and capable of know harm on its own.
Weakness: It's useless except for launching bubbles..

15Konoha's #1 Coward  Empty Re: Konoha's #1 Coward Fri Nov 21, 2014 5:43 am

Sato

Sato



  • Bubble Shot: Approved.
  • Suiton: Big Geyser Technique: Why exactly is the water heated without any katon element or such?
  • Suiton: Bubble Blower: How is this created, instead of a jutsu go make this an item.

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