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Akasha no Ato's Vault Fantastique [Don't Move/Lock, Vault Mode Activated]

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Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

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[spoiler=""][b]Name:[/b][a realistic name, please.]
[b]Rank:[/b][What rank is this Jutsu?]
[b]Type:[/b][ninjutsu, genjutsu, etc.]
[b]Used For:[/b][Is this a Offensive or Defensive Jutsu? If both just state so.]
[b]Element:[/b][Does this jutsu have an element?]
[b]Range:[/b][how far can this Jutsu reach?]
[b]Duration:[/b] [How long does this jutsu last for?]
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b][How many seals does this jutsu require or how long does it take to charge before use?]
[b]Parent Technique:[/b][From which technique is this one derived?]
[b]Description:[/b][What does this Jutsu do? What does it look like etc.. details are important.]
[b]Weakness:[/b][EVERY CUSTOM JUTSU MUST HAVE ONE, NO BUTS.]
[/spoiler]



Last edited by Akasha on Thu Nov 20, 2014 3:30 pm; edited 2 times in total

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Seal of Subjective Mass and Gravity:

Kakki Kakkiru:

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Nomi to Tettsuigiri:



Last edited by Akasha on Thu Nov 20, 2014 11:03 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Upped rank to B-rank)

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Bump for the above.

Sato

Sato



  • Seal of Subjective Mass and Gravity:Denied. Too similar to the Tsuchikage's Weight jutsu which is on the banned list.
  • Kakki Kakkiru: Approved.
  • Nomi to Tettsuigiri: Bump this to B.

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Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Ok, rank has been upped.

And here are some new techniques:

Kankan Fūin:

Narukami:

Wakugumi Fūin:

Fūin:

Yareme no Kanshisha no Fūin:



Last edited by Akasha on Fri Nov 21, 2014 9:40 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Requested edits made.)

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Yet another jutsu:

Kusege Fūin:

Sato

Sato



  • Nomi to Tettsuigiri: Approved.
  • Kankan Fūin: Bump this D.
  • Narukami: The range of this technique is enough to make this technique C-rank so lower the ranges or bump the technique to C. Also how is the creator of the seal warned when it just creates a rumble? everyone in range should feel the rumble not only you?
  • Wakugumi Fūin: You missed a lot of fields.
  • Fūin: Kekkai Keichō: I don't understand this. You are saying that you can create an A-ranked barrier with C-rank amount of chakra? if so then nope.
  • Yareme no Kanshisha no Fūin: Don't understand this technique one bit.
  • Kusege Fūin: Approved.

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Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Sato wrote:


  • Nomi to Tettsuigiri: Approved.
  • Kankan Fūin: Bump this D.
  • Narukami: The range of this technique is enough to make this technique C-rank so lower the ranges or bump the technique to C. Also how is the creator of the seal warned when it just creates a rumble? everyone in range should feel the rumble not only you?
  • Wakugumi Fūin: You missed a lot of fields.
  • Fūin: Kekkai Keichō: I don't understand this. You are saying that you can create an A-ranked barrier with C-rank amount of chakra? if so then nope.
  • Yareme no Kanshisha no Fūin: Don't understand this technique one bit.
  • Kusege Fūin: Approved.



  • Nomi to Tettsuigiri: Cool!
  • Kankan Fūin: Now D-ranked
  • Narukami: Range lowered and now explocitly warns everyone in range via the rumble.
  • Wakugumi Fūin: Fields filled
  • Fūin: Kekkai Keichō: Not yet edited.
  • Yareme no Kanshisha no Fūin: Added some clarification: it is in essence a seal to help with infiltration to serve as a defense against torture, interrogation, and mind techniques. It does this by creating a "dummy mind" with its own personality, the "dummy mind" beliving itself to be the only one in the body due to being unaware of the true mind which is in actual control.
  • Kusege Fūin: Cool xD



And look at that, a new technique!

Kishu Bakuhatsu Fūin:

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Tsūkei Torimono Fūin:

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Hakkōdō Mujou no Shinnyo:

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Fūinkiri Kūken:

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Fūin - Renkai Chozousho:

Aerie Locke

Aerie Locke

ALL APPROVED.

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Hakkōdō Mujou no Shinnyo - Hakkō Sōzō:

Hakkōdō Mujou no Shinnyo - Hakkō Tate Sōzō:



Last edited by Akasha on Tue Dec 09, 2014 1:41 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Edits done.)

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Hakkō Souzou - Karatakewari:

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

A bump from I don't know how many days (5+?) and a new tech.

Chakura Minofusukī Saikuru Inshō:

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin



Hakko Sozo - I need you to add a max size for these weapons. Also you have an unfinished sentence, as if you were about to add something and either forgot to or decided not to. Either way, it should be removed or completed.

Hakko Tate Sozo - I am confused with this technique, though this may simply be a misunderstanding on my part. But, do explain the last two sentences of the first paragraph to me. Techniques barrier can block, 1 of its rank, 2 of a rank lower (c), 4 if two ranks lower, or something to that effect should be added. Because you shall not be allowed to block attacks indefinitely solely because it isn’t of the same rank as the barrier. You seem to have an incomplete sentence in the first sentence of the second paragraph, as if you were going to add something but forgot to. Decrease the firing range.

Karatakewari - Jutsu, weapons, items, etc. only, yes? What I mean is, you cannot cleave people in two with this technique, though they can sustain a good deal of damage if hit by this technique. Weakness isn’t really a weakness, at least not one that I would accept.

Chakura Minofusukī Saikuru Inshō - Grand technique, one question though. Why not just simply make this technique one that can be maintained? On top of that, your weakness isn’t really a weakness, at least not one I would accept do change it.

Akasha

Akasha
Kiri Jounin
Kiri Jounin

Ok, Hakkō Sōzō and Hakkō Tate Sōzō have been edited. Still not done with the other two (Karatakewari and Chakura Minofusukī), but please check the first pair? Thanks.

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin



Hakko Sozo and Hakko Tate Sozo are approved unless stated otherwise. I apologize for the wait.

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