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1Rakki's customs Empty Rakki's customs Sun Nov 16, 2014 1:51 am

Rakki

Rakki
Kiri Genin
Kiri Genin

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[b]Name:[/b][a realistic name, please.]
[b]Rank:[/b][What rank is this Jutsu?]
[b]Type:[/b][ninjutsu, genjutsu, etc.]
[b]Used For:[/b][Is this a Offensive or Defensive Jutsu? If both just state so.]
[b]Element:[/b][Does this jutsu have an element?]
[b]Range:[/b][how far can this Jutsu reach?]
[b]Duration:[/b] [How long does this jutsu last for?]
[b]Hand Seals/Charge up:[/b][How many seals does this jutsu require or how long does it take to charge before use?]
[b]Description:[/b][What does this Jutsu do? What does it look like etc.. details are important.]
[b]Weakness:[/b][EVERY CUSTOM JUTSU MUST HAVE ONE, NO BUTS.]

2Rakki's customs Empty Re: Rakki's customs Sun Nov 16, 2014 2:10 am

Rakki

Rakki
Kiri Genin
Kiri Genin

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Name: Ice Fang
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu
Used For: Both
Element: Hyoton
Range: User
Duration: Until broken
Hand Seals/Charge up: The user runs their hand across a weapon to create a blade of ice for various purposes.
Description: The user creates a blade of ice with the aforementioned way of creation. The user can add an additional length of ice equal to the length of a nodachi blade on any weapon they have. The ice is almost as sharp as steel and not quite as durable, but it is slightly lighter.
Weakness: While useful in certain situations, the ice blade will not stand up to steel blades very well. Actual swords deal one rank more of damage than they would against actual blades.

Name: Hiding in Snow
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Both
Element: Hyoton
Range: 100 meters (one football field)
Duration: Maintainable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Tiger, Dragon
Description: An advanced version of the Hiding in Mist technique, the user instead creates a veil of whirling ice crystals similar to snow, hence the name. This allows for subtle attacks and also lowers the temperature of the surrounding area by 10 degrees every post it is in use down to a low point of 30 degrees Fahrenheit.
Weakness: Must know Hiding in Mist technique beforehand.

Name: Single-Target Ice Spike
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: Hyoton
Range: melee
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Boar
Description: After making the required hand seal, the user gathers Hyoton chakra into the palms of their hands and gets within range of their target. Thrusting out their hand and expelling the chakra simultaneously generates an ice spike two feet long and two inches thick instantly, allowing for very quick kills.
Weakness: The user cannot use another ninjutsu until this jutsu is released, meaning if they can't get close enough fast enough, then they're forced to be sitting ducks or to dispel the jutsu and waste the chakra for it.

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Name: Ice Senbon
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offense
Element: Hyoton
Range: However far you can throw a senbon
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: The user focuses Hyoton chakra into their hands and creates three senbon made of ice. These senbon are as strong as regular senbon, are just as sharp, and are slightly lighter though it is nearly immeasurable.
Weakness: While useful, each usage generates only three senbon and takes up a hand that could be used for stronger ninjutsu. More of a supporting jutsu.



Last edited by Rakki on Tue Nov 18, 2014 7:56 am; edited 2 times in total

3Rakki's customs Empty Re: Rakki's customs Sun Nov 16, 2014 9:03 pm

Aerie Locke

Aerie Locke

REVIEW.

Ice Fang: You should make the Rank D-B instead of just D since the amount of chakra used to make the blade depends on the user's choice. Secondly, you should add a hierarchy for what the different ranked ice does, because putting B Chakra into making an Ice Sword versus D Chakra isn't mentioned.

Hiding in Snow: Approved.

Ice Spike: Approved.

Senbon: I don't see the point of this jutsu. You could easily buy Senbon at the Weapon's Shop instead of expelling chakra to form Senbon that are roughly the same as metal ones. It's a pointless jutsu that is probably weaker than normal Senbon.

4Rakki's customs Empty Re: Rakki's customs Mon Nov 17, 2014 2:28 am

Rakki

Rakki
Kiri Genin
Kiri Genin

I edited the Ice Fang to just be one rank instead of the possibility of three to make it simpler to use and figure out in a roleplaying situation.

As for the senbon, it's more or less a utility technique. What if I'm out of senbon to throw? It's just nice to have a way to keep the bukijutsu up once I've exhausted my physical supply, as well it takes less time to just generate three senbon than reach into a pouch, prepare them, then throw them. So it's also a way to very quickly surprise somebody.

5Rakki's customs Empty Re: Rakki's customs Tue Nov 18, 2014 5:33 am

Rakki

Rakki
Kiri Genin
Kiri Genin

bump a lump lump

6Rakki's customs Empty Re: Rakki's customs Tue Nov 18, 2014 6:33 am

Chikara

Chikara
Kiri Chunin
Kiri Chunin



Exact range for Hiding In Snow.

Bump Senbon to D.

Once done, all techniques shall be approved.

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