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1Umi Clan {DONE} Empty Umi Clan {DONE} Fri Jan 03, 2014 2:34 pm

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Clan Name: Umi {海原, Ocean - Sea} Clan
Clan element/'s: Coral Release {Sangoton} Umi Clan {DONE} FgoOAZc, Water Release {Suiton} Umi Clan {DONE} 18px-Nature_Icon_Water.svg, & Earth Release {Doton} Umi Clan {DONE} 18px-Nature_Icon_Earth.svg
Special characteristics/traits:

  • Coral Release | KKG | Rare - Coral Release is an Advanced Element using Water & Earth alone {Clan Only}. It's more of Life and Water combined to create a living life form, close to a plant, out of Chakra. This advanced element is rare and exclusive, however, in the Umi Clan. Only a handful in all of history have recieved it. Coral Release includes creating Coral from the skin, another's skin by contact and seed planting, or the ground. There has only been one other Clan member in history to have Coral Release other than Miuu Umi, and that was Yagura Umi. Coral Release usually skips many generations before being picked up by another member when born. Also, Coral Release is made from Water {Suiton} alone. However, it can also be created from Water {Suiton} and Earth {Doton}.
  • Coral Release Skin & Bones | Passive KKG | Rare - For the user of Coral Release, their skin is coated in coral in the color of their normal skin, creating a hard, durable 'shield'. However, the backside, the part that touches the skin, of the coral is extremely flexible, allowing the user to move loose and free. Also, the user's bones naturally become coral-like, allowing them to gain the abilities a lot like the Kaguya Clan's. This means they can edge coral from out of their skin with little-to-no pain.
  • Underwater Breathing - The Umi Clan have advanced lunges that allow them to stay underwater for about an hour without oxygen. This means they're practically incapable of being drowned.
  • H2O Love & Need - The Umi Clan have a strange fondness to anything water related; rain, tap water, saltwater, snow, ice, etc. and they usually drink 10 cups of water a day.

Note: Every Umi Clan Member have the last two traits.
Note: Most, if not all, Umi Clan Members use the Water {Suiton} Element.
Location: Kirigakure

Bloodline Name: Coral Release/Coral Release Skin and Bones
Bloodline Ability: Coral Release is an Advanced Element using Water & Earth alone {Clan Only}. It's more of Life and Water combined to create a living life form, close to a plant, out of Chakra. This advanced element is rare and exclusive, however, in the Umi Clan. Only a handful in all of history have recieved it. Coral Release includes creating Coral from the skin, another's skin by contact and seed planting, or the ground. For the user of Coral Release, their skin is coated in coral in the color of their normal skin, creating a hard, durable 'shield'. However, the backside, the part that touches the skin, of the coral is extremely flexible, allowing the user to move loose and free. Also, the user's bones naturally become coral-like, allowing them to gain the abilities a lot like the Kaguya Clan's. This means they can edge coral from out of their skin with little-to-no pain. Also, Coral Release is made from Water {Suiton} alone. However, it can also be created from Water {Suiton} and Earth {Doton}.
Secret Clan Jutsu:

Normal elemental Jutsu:

Coral Release Jutsu:

Clan History:

The History of The Umi Clan:

Members: 1/2



Last edited by Spirit on Sat Jan 04, 2014 12:24 am; edited 9 times in total

2Umi Clan {DONE} Empty Re: Umi Clan {DONE} Fri Jan 03, 2014 2:59 pm

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The Clan Element portion of the templatue is meant for a clan's element that is typically custom/advanced or that has gained an advantage over another user with the element. So in your case it would be Coral Release, in the special characteristics and bloodline ability area you can expand on what other elements makes up the Coral Release.

If the clan member's tend to have a common element, as seen with the Fire element being common among the Uchiha, then that can be placed in the special characteristics/traits area of the template.

Seeing as you are stating that Coral Release is rare within the clan then please post how many member may have coral release and how many are regular members that only have the anatomy and underwater adaptation.




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3Umi Clan {DONE} Empty Re: Umi Clan {DONE} Fri Jan 03, 2014 3:09 pm

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4Umi Clan {DONE} Empty Re: Umi Clan {DONE} Fri Jan 03, 2014 3:48 pm

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Can you place your jutsu in the sites template please.




Name: Water Release: Tidal Shot {水遁・潮の弾, Suiton: Ushio Shotto}
Rank: C
Element: Suiton {Water}
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid (5-10m)
Description: The user performs a set of handseals and manifest three to five water segments. The user can shoot these 'segments' at the target, making them shoot at ten miles per hour to thirty miles per hour. The user can also control where the shots go and which way they sway. If the target is hit directly, the blast will most likely knock them off their feet and cause great pain in the impacted area.

Can you change the red area to Taijutsu basic speeds.




Name: Water Release: Waterfall Barrier Bullets {水遁・滝障壁弾丸, Suiton: Bakufu Nankan Dangan}
Rank: C-B
Element: Suiton {Water}
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short(0-5m), Mid (5-10m), Long (10-20m)
Description: The user manifests a wall of pure water chakra and makes it flow like a waterfall. The user then sends off multiple hardened/sharpened water bullets from it's surface. One Half of the bullets, if hit directly, may pierce the target and cause bleeding. {10 Bullets if C Rank, 20 Bullets if B Rank}

Name: Water Release: Waterfall Barrier Sickles  {水遁・滝障壁鎌, Suiton: Bakufu Nankan Tou}
Rank: C-B
Element: Suiton {Water}
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short(0-5m), Mid (5-10m), Long (10-20m)
Description: The user manifests a wall of pure water chakra and makes it flow like a waterfall. The user then sends off multiple hardened/sharpened water sickles from it's surface. One Half of the sickles, if hit directly, may pierce or slice a limb from the target and cause bleeding.{5 Sickles if C Rank, 10 Sickles if B Rank}

Name: Earth Release: Mud Bullet  
Rank: C
Element: Doton {Earth}
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid (5-10m)
Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the user kneads the ground in front of them to make a pool of mud. Then, the user makes one final hand signal and a large ball of mud is fired from the pool and towards the intended target. The user can control the density and phase state of the mudball with their chakra, enabling to make it hard enough to dent or even pierce through steel. Otherwise, its semi-liquid form is perfect for blinding the foe by a strike to the face to enable escape or another method of attacking.

Can you add that these bullets/sickles move at Taijutsu Basic speeds.




Name: Earth Release: Mud Bullet Barrage
Rank: B
Element: Doton {Earth}
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid (5-10m) & Long (10-20m)
Description: This is the advanced version of the Earth Release: Mud Bullet Technique. After forming the needed hand signals and creating a pool of mud using chakra, the user can launch multiple mudballs at their target. These mudballs' size and desnity can be changed at will; from simply blinding and temporarily stunning the target to a barrage of hardened earth spheres that can cause severe external and internal injury and can dent steel. The mudballs can fuse into one giant sphere in mid-flight if the user wishes.

Can you give an amount of mudballs that are release.




Name: Coral Release: Coral Shield Ram
Rank: B
Element: Sangoton {Coral Release}
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short(0-5m)
Description: After a small array of handseals, the Sangoton {Coral Release} user creates a shield of coral from their body wherever they please. This shield is home to many spiky protrusions each being spike 6 inches. The shield itself can withstand a plethora of C-rank skills, while also holding its composure against 3 B-rank attacks. One A-Rank attack however, destroys the shield. This defense can also be used in a dome shape to provide defense from multiple angles. The dome form of this jutsu also houses the same spiky protrusions, this tiny 8 inches thick and the dome can defend three people, including the user, comfortably.

Can you make the following edit:

  1. Can you lower this to two(2) please. Defends against one B-rank technique because of the same rank then another B-rank technique would break it.
  2. This needs to be made into a second jutsu.





Name: Coral Release: Coral Hollow Shell Bullets
Rank: B
Element: Sangoton {Coral Release}
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short(0-5m) & Mid (5-10m)
Description: These hollowed bullets can be fired from various points of a Sangoton users body, from their modified bone structure consisting of coral. Though, the name suggest they are hollow, only the fronts are, while the end of the bullets contain bundles of nematocyst. Upon collision with the fronts being hollow they shatter creating more tissue damage than a normal pierce wound. The many nematocyst are the splattered around the wounded area and enter the bloodstream of the target. In the blood stream they numb the affected area, with an intense burning feeling, close to that of a fire. Eventually (3 Posts) The limb will go completely numb and will not be able to be used for (2 Posts). Many of these bullets can be fired at once, but only two areas may be afflicted with the numbing side effects. It is the users choice which areas are numbed, if more than two areas are struck. The bullets may also be fired as typical bullets, similar to that of the Kaguya clan.

This technique needs to be raised to A-rank because of the second effect in the area in red. In addition, can you give a number amount to the bullets.




Post a reply when the edits have been made please.

5Umi Clan {DONE} Empty Re: Umi Clan {DONE} Sat Jan 04, 2014 12:25 am

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