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1Akumazoku Clan Empty Akumazoku Clan Fri May 30, 2014 6:41 am

Demonfist

Demonfist
Iwa Anbu
Iwa Anbu

Akumazoku Clan 1prj

Clan Name:Akumazoku ( Evil Demon Race)
Clan element/'s: Fire, Lightning
Special characteristics/traits: Can use there element without the use of handseals( Only alpha) Same goes for the dematerialize jutsu.
Location:Scattered

Bloodline Name: Alpha Stigma or Lino Doue
Bloodline Ability: Alpha Stigma:
Spoiler:

The Alpha Stigma is known as a trait which happens in a few members
across the land in this clan. It is the magic eye which is able to analyse and understand all Ninjutsu. It is also possible for the Alpha Stigma to analyse structures around the bearer. The Alpha Stigma is usually activated by the death of a friend or family member, which causes the user to go
on a rampage, seeking destruction and death for those around the user. Users seem to have a god-like persona which has to wreak havoc until either the body burns out( Runs out of chraka) or the user forces its alter ego to stop( Which require years of training), or the Alpha Stigma in its weakened state( when user is low on charka) is simply closed ( by someone other then the user) meaning someone closes the users eyes thus canceling out the dojutsu( this being dangerous due to the user still being in a state of insanity).  This dojutus allows the user to harness his element in its purest form. Allowing the user to fire beams of concentrated of fire or lightning or create barriers and shields. It also allows the user to know what kind of jutus the opponent is going to use( Other then KKG and jutsu higher then ones own rank) while the person is forming the handseals( Only works with the elements the user has can not learn the jutsu regardless of element just know what it is before use). Also give the user the ability it to dematerialize anything he/she Comes into contact with. This is a rare ability even for the user of this dojutsu. This being because you can only acquire that skill after years of training and mastering your dojutsu which only happens upon becoming an adult( anytime after 18) which most if not all members of the clan who activated this dojutsu in there youth could not learn to control there insanity and were killed before entering there adult lives.


Cons:

The ability to dematerialize things cost twice the charka amount in which a normal attack is based off of.

Using no hand seals cost a rank and a half of charka to perform.

Deactivating the dojutus cost half of your remaining charka.

Once dojutsu is active the user is fueled with bloodlust and slight insanity.

Lino Doue:
Spoiler:

The Lino Doue is able to devour the lives of humans. In addition, the bearers seem to have a lust for human
flesh as well. One who uses the Lino Doue is able to absorb charka and mana from humans, due to the fact that the human body contains both charka and mana(Life Force). The Lino Doue seems to not have a point of insanity similar to Alpha Stigma, but the users have been shown to become angered when provoked and not when the eyes active.
When a user of these eyes absorbs charka or the lives of people, they can regenerate their wounds and become stronger, though they can still be wounded or killed. The user of this dojutsu retains the same abilitys as the alpha stigma( Excluding the ability to dematerialize anything they see)

Cons: Ninjutsu is the primary skill can learn taijutsu and medical ninjutsu only are banned from learning anything else.

Cost one and a half rank of charka to use jutsu.

Only killing someone and eating there corpse can heal major wounds.

User of this dojutsu is easily provoked into fighting or killing.

Secret Clan Jutsu: Katon user
Spoiler:
Lightning User
Spoiler:

Clan History: Not much is known about this clan. It is said that they have been around for centuries hidden in the land of demons. They are believed to be worship like gods there. It wasn't until 30 years ago that proof of there existence came to pass. They are worshiped because there eyes are believed to be gifts from the god of darkness himself. Granting the users unimaginable power and prowess in the art of ninjutsu.  But with that power also comes a curse. The welders of this dojutsu are said to go mad and kill any and everything without a care. Most fear them saying they are alined with the demon god himself. Of course these are just mere stories passed down from generation to generation no one really knows how true these story are though. Since no one has never seen a member of this clan........
Members: As many as I deem max is 6 ( Needs my permission to join) Only two members can have the special dematerialize ability.



Last edited by Demonfist on Thu Jun 19, 2014 6:20 pm; edited 6 times in total

2Akumazoku Clan Empty Re: Akumazoku Clan Sat May 31, 2014 6:51 am

Demonfist

Demonfist
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Iwa Anbu

Akumazoku Clan 1103874518  Oh yeah ready!!!

3Akumazoku Clan Empty Re: Akumazoku Clan Sat May 31, 2014 11:13 am

Kid Koopa

Kid Koopa
Kumo Genin
Kumo Genin

Demonfist wrote:Akumazoku Clan 1prj

Clan Name:Akumazoku ( Evil Demon Race)
Clan element/'s: Fire, Lightning
Special characteristics/traits: Can use there element without the use of handseals( Only alpha) Same goes for the dematerialize jutsu.
Location:Scattered

Bloodline Name: Alpha Stigma or Lino Doue
Bloodline Ability: Alpha Stigma:
Spoiler:

The Alpha Stigma is known as a trait which happens in a few members
across the land in this clan. It is the magic eye which is able to analyse and understand all Ninjutsu. It is also possible for the Alpha Stigma to analyse structures around the bearer. The Alpha Stigma is usually activated by the death of a friend or family member, which causes the user to go
on a rampage, seeking destruction and death for those around the user. Users seem to have a god-like persona which has to wreak havoc until either the body burns out( Runs out of chraka) or the user forces its alter ego to stop( Which require years of training), or the Alpha Stigma is
crystallized<-this term needs to be described, as normally crystallizing an eye would render it useless. and gouged out. (This can be done with all Stigmas). Crystallization occurs by disruption of the user eyes or mind( Via a large amount of charka enter the users body via another person), which drives the user to the edge of madness and beyond, allowing the crystal to be gouged out. This dojutus allows the user to harness his element in its purest form. Allowing the user to fire beams of concentrated of fire or lightning or create barriers and shields. It also allows the user to know what kind of jutus the opponent is going to use( Other then KKG) while the person is forming the handseals( Only works with the elements the user has can not learn the jutsu regardless of element just know what it is before use). doesn't work on custom jutsu either or jutsu ranked higher than yourself Also give the user the ability it to dematerialize anything he/she
Comes into contact with. This is a rare ability even for the user of this dojutsu. explain

Cons: Can only have one element either lightning or fire. Can't learn any other elements regardless of rank.

The ability to dematerialize things cost twice the charka amount in which a normal attack is based off of.

Using no hand seals cost a rank and a half of charka to perform.

Can only know ninjutsu and taijutsu are banned from learning anything else.

Deactivating the dojutus cost half of your remaining charka.

Once dojutsu is active the user is fueled with bloodlust and slight insanity.

Lino Doue:
Spoiler:

The Lino Doue is able to devour the lives of humans. In addition, the bearers seem to have a lust for human
flesh as well. One who uses the Lino Doue is able to absorb charka and mana from humans, due to the fact that the human body contains both charka and mana(Life Force). The Lino Doue seems to not have a point of insanity similar to Alpha Stigma, but the users have been shown to become angered when provoked and not when the eyes active.
When a user of these eyes absorbs charka or the lives of people, they can regenerate their wounds and become stronger, though they can still be wounded or killed. The user of this dojutsu retains the same abilitys as the alpha stigma( Excluding the ability to dematerialize anything they see)

Cons: Ninjutsu is the primary skill can learn taijutsu and medical ninjutsu only are banned from learning anything else.

Cost one and a half rank of charka to use jutsu.

Only killing someone and eating there corpse can heal major wounds.

User of this dojutsu is easily provoked into fighting or killing.

Secret Clan Jutsu: Katon user
Spoiler:
Lightning User
Spoiler:

Clan History: Not much is known about this clan. It is said that they have been around for centuries hidden in the land of demons. They are believed to be worship like gods there. It wasn't until 30 years ago that proof of there existence came to pass. They are worshiped because there eyes are believed to be gifts from the god of darkness himself. Granting the users unimaginable power and prowess in the art of ninjutsu.  But with that power also comes a curse. The welders of this dojutsu are said to go mad and kill any and everything without a care. Most fear them saying they are alined with the demon god himself. Of course these are just mere stories passed down from generation to generation no one really knows how true these story are though. Since no one has never seen a member of this clan........
Members: As many as I deem max is 6 ( Needs my permission to join) Only two members can have the special dematerialize ability.

4Akumazoku Clan Empty Re: Akumazoku Clan Fri Jun 06, 2014 6:12 pm

Demonfist

Demonfist
Iwa Anbu
Iwa Anbu

Edited

5Akumazoku Clan Empty Re: Akumazoku Clan Thu Jun 12, 2014 4:54 pm

Demonfist

Demonfist
Iwa Anbu
Iwa Anbu

Bumped for approval

6Akumazoku Clan Empty Re: Akumazoku Clan Tue Jun 17, 2014 2:59 am

Kid Koopa

Kid Koopa
Kumo Genin
Kumo Genin

Dematerialize is still an instakill and you need to specify the dimensions of this beam

7Akumazoku Clan Empty Re: Akumazoku Clan Tue Jun 17, 2014 6:32 am

Demonfist

Demonfist
Iwa Anbu
Iwa Anbu

Edited removed the touch aspect, added something else and went into a little bit of detail, hope this suffice.

8Akumazoku Clan Empty Re: Akumazoku Clan Thu Jun 19, 2014 11:08 am

Nira Sjane

Nira Sjane

Rather the issue I believe is that the jutsu alludes to obliterating everything regardless of obstruction or defenses (big reason dust release is an issue). So either strike the part about it disintegrating anything in it's path or specify that it is still effected by barriers of sufficient strength.
It may sound silly but diction is a big part that can come to bite people in the butt.

9Akumazoku Clan Empty Re: Akumazoku Clan Thu Jun 19, 2014 6:23 pm

Demonfist

Demonfist
Iwa Anbu
Iwa Anbu

Oh ok now I understand what he was getting at, totally makes sense edited removed the " disintegrates everything in its path" and also added it is susceptible to barriers of equal strength. Hope that helps and thanks for clearing up my confusion.

10Akumazoku Clan Empty Re: Akumazoku Clan Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:46 am

Kenryu

Kenryu

Apologies for stepping in, but a more in-depth review of the application is necessary at this stage. Please bear with me, and we'll start from the top.

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Alpha Stigma cannot be approved in its current state.

Spoiler:

Lino Doue cannot be approved in its current state.

Spoiler:

Secret Clan Jutsu.

Spoiler:

-

Dematerialization, ability and jutsu:

In short, there's a lot that needs fixing.

Good luck. Hope this helps and you get your clan approved, though.

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