Queso
Length of the Story: 26
Storyline Quality: 10
Dialogue Quality: 13
Writing Skills: 36
Imagination: 5
Grand Total: 90
Don is such an adorable character! I really like how neat your paragraphs are split apart too! I gave you five imagination points because I had to stop and squeal when he started referring to his puppets as his children. Too cute! I had to take off some points for several run on sentences, and a short post. Over all, this was awesome~!
Ki
Length of the Story: 12
Storyline Quality: 8
Dialogue Quality: 10
Writing Skills: 27
Imagination: 0
Grand Total: 57
There you go Ki. Your posts were fairly short so you don't get much there. You should put more work into your posts and try to somewhat match the length of the person you're RPing with out of respect~<3 Otherwise, the thread was a neat daily interaction type of thing.
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